Remember
your kiddie days? When getting all excited about making your parents’ day
special was normal? When you put in a day’s work (or more) into creating that
special Happy Birthday card for your Mom? I really hope that spark and that
desire to do something special for your parents never fades away. But sometimes
it does. You still make efforts, and it may seem somewhat similar to how it
used to be, but deep in your heart you know it is not. Sometimes it’s
mechanical, a habit. And the day seems good, but it is good at a superficial
level. But sometimes, even though a day before the special day you’re
not up for anything, the clouds may part, the stars may shift and everything
can change. For the best, of course! Here’s a story.
***
Yet
another lazy Saturday,
thought Sara as she sat on the floor in front of her floor level bookcase,
sifting through paperbacks, trying to choose. She had had a small argument with
dad that morning and had spent all afternoon holed inside her room with the
intermittent internet, before giving it up altogether and turning all cheery
and normal again. Still, that didn’t make much of a difference, except that she
wasn’t all that enthusiastic about the crumbling state of her technological
devices. Hell with it, she thought. It was a beautiful day, one of those
rare ones when bang in the middle of a hot-hot summer, the clouds betrayed and
danced and clashed and shed enchanted water on the Earth. She stood for a while
in their verandah, right in the drizzle, letting tiny droplets pat her
cheeks and hair and shoulders, looking at the row of houses looking magical and
dreamy in that rainy-weather light, trees and plants turning greener with each
second.
Her mom
called her in for tea. “I’ve got to go to the gurudwara. You’ll come
with me?” she asked Sara while sipping on her cup. Under normal circumstances,
Sara would have agreed to go, with just a slight hesitation. Not because she
had anything against religious places of worship, but because it was the vacations and getting out of the house required making a sincere effort to look
presentable. Today though, of course Sara agreed, and it was a very
enthusiastic agreement. It’s really just these moments that make people realize
what a mood swing of the Almighty (for want of normal words, pleasant weather
change) could do. Besides, she had been struck with an idea and she really
wanted to make it work. Sunday was Father’s Day and she had earlier planned on
making a greeting card and presenting it in the morning. Now though, she wanted
to do something more than just a card.
It had been
five and a half days since her father had been trying to find an old movie
online. He did find a few legitimate links, but none of them worked smoothly
and he had just been disappointed. Sara decided it would be cool if she could
find a CD for that movie and surprise him with it on Father’s Day. A bouquet of
fresh roses scented with the rain in the morning would be a welcome gift too! Her mom hopped in on her plan and the two set off on Sara’s scooty,
telling dad they’d be back soon from the gurudwara and stopping by the
mobile shop for a recharge. By the time Sara was taking out her scooty, she was
feeling giddy with enthusiasm. It was drizzling, and she was one hell of an
adventurous girl.
Here’s a bit
about Sara’s mom. She’s an average built woman with auburn and black hair. Sara
quite liked the orangish hue that came from frequent use of herbal mehendi. Her
mom isn’t much of a chemical fan. She’s a sensitive brown-eyed person with a
golden heart and hence it had been years since Sara and her dad and mischievous
brother had played a prank on Mom. They feared she might just drop unconscious
from shock, so it was better to be safe than sorry. Plus, sometimes it was
total role-reversal; Sara the mom and the mom, the kid. Even though it was Sara
who drove the scooty each time they had to go shop for home products, her mom
was perennially afraid of the monstrous Delhi traffic and had that constant
edge in her heart and expression, so focused on the thousands of motor vehicles
on the road that she wouldn’t even reply to what Sara might be saying from the
front.
The roads
were wet and Sara and her mom, both were feeling quite happy, just because of
the awesomely pleasant weather, and they decided Sara would drive really slowly
and they’d make it to all the places they had to visit. A mental note was made,
and they started off, driving through their block and onto the roads. Sara
tried driving as slow as possible, and carefully wove around the streets and
cars, hoping her mom was enjoying the ride-in-the-drizzle as much as she was
and made it to the main road. Just before entering a crossing, she braked hard
and the scooty’s brake made an annoying screechy sound, before coming to an
abrupt halt. Her mom got anxious, but Sara simply held up her left hand to her and
gave a nod that said, ‘It’s okay. There was just an idiot three-wheeler
speeding like an ass on a dangerous wet road’. She rode her way calmly into
the main road, avoiding the potholes and slowing to a crawl on the speed-breakers.
Cyclists and rickshaws passed them and just looking at that, Sara burst
into laughter, right there driving on the road and her mom said, “You can
definitely go a bit faster. We don’t have all night to roam around.”
They reached
their trademark flower seller, the guy who knew Sara and her family ever since
Sara was a year old. She waited for the guy to end a phone call, duly ignoring
the other two sellers who were beckoning them towards their own stalls. But
Sara was one hell of a loyalist. Mr. Hari ended his phone call and smiled up at
them. “A bouquet of roses, to be delivered tomorrow morning!” Sara recited. Mr.
Hari handed her a small card on which she wrote, “Happy Father’s Day pops!” and
turned the card over to write the address. Sara had this amazingly creepy
talent: she could get lost in her mind while doing stuff that didn’t require
much intellectual use, like writing down her own address. You remember such
things by heart, so she was imagining the glow of happiness on her dad’s face
when she’d wake him and mom up the next morning with green tea, all while
jotting down the address, so she didn’t realize she had written the complete
address, city and pin code included! For a local flower seller who delivers
flowers up to one kilometre. She broke into a laugh as soon as she realized it
and her mom joined in. The thing about Sara’s mom? She was known to laugh a lot
and when in a funny situation, everyone would have stopped laughing a while ago
and her mom would still be at it, thinking of what had happened over and over,
so that the others got themselves into another round of laughter, just looking
at how mom’s laugh is funnier than the joke!
Her
road-phobic mom decided to check out the CD shop on the opposite road, instead
of the one further away, which would require the scooty. It was getting dark by
then and both these girls (her mom is the classic case of the ‘I’m not old’ brigade)
hated when daylight ended. For Sara, it was spooky, even though at the same
time she liked the mysteriousness. For her mom, it was just an opportunity for
Delhi’s criminal population to surface and kidnap girls like Sara, so she
usually avoided the dark. But that day it was quite a crowd out there and lots
of traffic and it was only late evening, what with the amazing feel-good
weather, so they just went on doing things a little faster. They visited the CD
shop, where the owner sadly replied that he didn’t have that movie, but told
them of some other shop which might stock it. Mom was totally out of it by
then, because if there was anything that scared her more than the inside main
roads, it would be the outer main roads, complete with proper red lights and
vehicles ranging from cycles to DTC buses, all on the same lane.
Sara though,
was totally in the mood and she suggested an inside road and said they’d park
there and walk the rest of the way, especially as they had to cross the hugest
main road of that area, to get to the other CD shop. Mom agreed reluctantly,
making Sara swear that she’d drive really carefully. Reaching the spot where Sara
thought they could park, to her dismay they saw the place full and they had to
get on the main-roads-ka-daddy-road, which for the first time made Sara
anxious. Darkness, the roads wet and slippery, mud and muck, people crammed at
the red lights! Yikes! Gradually, getting their ears molested with the thousands
of honks and creeping along the muck-filled road, they reached the place where
they had thought of parking. Alas, that was where a huge construction activity
was going on, with half the road blocked and a dull yellow, rusted crane stood where they
wanted to park. Sara had a negligible sense of direction even though she was
driving for the past 5 years, and her mom guided her near an apartment right on
the roadside, both feeling anxious and still laughing nervously as a huge bus
just passed them like a ghost, making Sara shudder.
It's not easy walking/driving on such a road, y'know! |
Scooty
parked, they now had to reach the CD shop which was across the daddy road,
complete with construction muck right in the centre. Sara held her mom’s hands
and they nervously tramped through the side of the road, stepping into puddles,
one behind the other, breaking into laughter every now and then at the idiocy
of their actions. They reached the crane and her mom stopped, just looking at
it in awestruck wonder as it lifted off a tin sheet, crumpled it up and dumped
it on the side. “We could so easily be crumpled like that if we just stand here,”
mom said, jerking her head towards the other couple of pedestrians who were
passing by. “Come on.” They reached that magnanimous signal and waited for
their side of the signal to turn red. Soon it did and they clutched each other’s
hands tightly and made it through half-way, right up to where the hugest
construction work that blocked half the road was standing, the warning boards
ending just where they now stood, waiting for the other signal to turn red.
They almost reached the whole way, still clutching hands and mom almost
running, just being careful enough to put her feet in the right places in case
she slipped. Sara held on and looked up and saw a car swerving around the
corner. Missing the car by turning to their right, the duo gave each other
nervous giggles and kept on moving.
To be continued....
***
This is such a feel-good-and-light post. Even more after having an awesome rainy day. Sara's adventure sure made me feel like I was there, witnessing every thing. :)
ReplyDeleteBut you shouldn't have left it hanging man, I was having fun reading. Waiting for the next part. Please post it tomorrow only. ;) :D
P.S: Getting 'Geeli'?!! ;) :P
Did I just see YOUR comment? :D You know you're the awesomest ever? :D
DeleteI have almost finished the next part too! I'll post it tomorrow, do not worry ;) I am a little apprehensive about how I've been writing these days, so I'm really hoping it was really like you said it is. I mean, aah, I don't know what I mean :P
PS- Yeah. Someone gave me the inspiration :P
I loved it!! It's so cute, I so hope nothing happens to Sara and her mum. I could feel my heart beat louder when they crossed the construction zone. Post the next part soon - it's disheartening to see a 'to be continued'!! :D
ReplyDelete:D Thanks AaeKay! Putting it up soon! I posted (finally) about those three awards you bestowed on this blog. Check it out ;)
DeleteOh.my.god... you know that feeling when you're watching something interesting and you're so engrossed, you're mouth falls open and you don't realise until either there's a commercial break or someone snaps you out of it? That's exactly what happened to me o.O (stop laughing!) Ya, so, this was excellent, made-me-gape-like-an-idiot kinda excellent :P
ReplyDeleteAnd ab tu kar torture -_- Ja, ja, I'm gonna torture you further by delaying Part 2 of my story :P Jaldi likiyo!!!
Oh and BTW, *stands and claps enthusiastically*- Kudos Ashna di :)
P.S. :O I love getting 'geeli' in the rain !!!! Remember I texted you that yesterday? :P I was "intoxiacated with rain" :P, hence the strange out-of-the-blue texting :D
*your -_- (mai gavaar nahi hu :P)
Delete:D HAHA!! Thanks Miss Ruya Preetika. ^_^
DeleteI mean, you have to trust me when I say I was not at all happy with this! Yes I didn't think a lot, yes I wrote it in one go and just posted, but still, it still has to be good, right? Thankyou for telling me it was! :D
I won't torture you yaar, I'll post it today itself. ;)
PS- Yeah! I'm sorry I forgot to reply. I was shaken up by the phone vibrating, saw your text, smiled and dozed off again :P Itni subah I don't get up during holidays. :P
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI am back after a sabbatical from blogs .But coming back and reading is great.
These are Nice lovely lines.I know It has just started raining at gurgaon and reading these lines kinda light and happy going things do help the mood.This is a nice post and shows the talent in you ."Daddy road" :)
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